Evelyn, I really like your piece and think you did an amazing job. The piece seems to be very soft but at the same time very hard which is a great juxtaposition. You also did a good job photographing the different angles of the piece because it looks great in every picture. It was also a good idea to use the black background since your piece is mainly white and it was good way to bring attention to the negative space.
A very successful approach to the problem of balancing solid and void, or occupied and unoccupied spaces. The construction works from several vantage points encouraging the viewer to look through the bands to discover interior shapes and forms. Effectively photographed as well, perhaps one shot even more closely cropped could have enhanced your presentation.
Evelyn, I really like your piece and think you did an amazing job. The piece seems to be very soft but at the same time very hard which is a great juxtaposition. You also did a good job photographing the different angles of the piece because it looks great in every picture. It was also a good idea to use the black background since your piece is mainly white and it was good way to bring attention to the negative space.
A very successful approach to the problem of balancing solid and void, or occupied and unoccupied spaces. The construction works from several vantage points encouraging the viewer to look through the bands to discover interior shapes and forms. Effectively photographed as well, perhaps one shot even more closely cropped could have enhanced your presentation.